Category Archives: Student 9

Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

I would like to describe you my best friend. A main reason for that I consider her my best friend is that she has a warm personality. With me she is very friendly and very politely [Word Order]. She always helps me … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

If you want to become  a good teacher you have to  wish  it truly.To be  a techer  is not  easy. It  needs a lot  of responsability, patience, love  for children. This  profession is not  very  well,paind and it needs a … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

  In “The Rabbits Who Caused All the Trouble” , J. Thurber argues the idea :  don’t disturb your enemies  if you know that this is your fool.      A family of rabbits lived near the wolves. These wolves were … Continue reading

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