Category Archives: Student 7

Text Analysis 1 (Student’s draft)

In the short story “Seeing people off” the author [who’s the author?] reveals how people try to change their life, because sometimes they have an incapacity of expressing their feelings in difficult moments of life [difficult to understand what you actually … Continue reading

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Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

John is ??? handsome and atractiv boy. He is tall. His hair is shiny black. John’s eyes are blue. His lips are sensual. His voice is fine and delicate and it sounds every time in my mind. John’s body seems … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

The teacher is the most beautiful flower [it should be a comparison to a flower, don’t you think so?]. Each petal of this flower represents his/her features. The teacher is kind , friendly and sociable [maybe you should have said one … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

     Huang Yipeng in his short story “Home alone” supports the idea that children must be more carefully if they remained   alone.  In the story there were two brothers. One day they  remained at home. At the door knocks a strange … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Unicorn in the Garden (Student’s draft)

James Thurber, in his short story “The Unicorn in the Garden” describes the idea that how a man invented a joke to escape of his domineering wife‘s grip. The man claimed that he saw a unicorn in the garden, but … Continue reading

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