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Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

One day I saw him in a restaurant. He passed by me. Definitely, I was delighted with his astounding perfume. He slid near me. I saw him entirely. He was probably twenty – one years old. He was like a … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

A teacher is like a tree. The root represents his knowledge. When the tree grows, its abilities [in what way?] also grow. [what about the other parts of the tree e.g. branches, leaves] But being a teacher is not an … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

“The wedding of Mrs. Fox “ (fairy tale by Brothers Grimm) In “The wedding of Mrs. Fox” the Brothers Grimm suggest the idea of unfaithfulness in marriage. They give as an example the family of Mr. and Mrs. Fox. One … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Unicorn in the Garden (Student’s draft)

In ,, The Unicorn in the Garden “ James Thurber shows that you cannot know who lives near . Theauthor  supports the main idea by using a beast – a unicorn to reveal the essence of the characters’ nature. One … Continue reading

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