Category Archives: Student 21

Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

I saw [maybe met] him when I was at school. I was really astonished. He is a handsome guy. I can say that (1) I found the beauty of life in him. He has brown hair and green eyes. I can say … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

Teachers are the light in the dark. We can say that the future depends on them. Without knowledge our life is like a long night. We can get easy lost. But our way is guided by the teachers. With their … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

In the tale “The Happy Prince” Oscar Wilde supports the idea that most of the time people don’t look what is inside of a person but they like only his [tyou’re being sexist]exterior (appearance). He gives us the most extraordinary … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Unicorn in the Garden (Student’s draft)

James Thurber in his work [fable] “The Unicorn in the Garden” shows that you [one]does not know the person who lives just beside them [in general, right?]. He argues [emphasizes] this idea by using the unicorn as a symbol of freedom. … Continue reading

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