Category Archives: Student 17

Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

She is not a tall person. She doesn’t have a blonde hair. Her eyes are dark. She is a nice and pretty girl. Every morning she is sleeping, because on her face we usually notice that she worked hard yesterday … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

Our teachers are a source of water which pours out without restriction. The source doesn’t choose who to give the water and the teachers don’t choose who to teach. They are very glad to share their knowledge with people. They … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

The author O. Henry in his short story “Two Thanksgiving Day Gentlemen” wrote about a poor man who didn’t have meal [this is not a TS].  He looked miserably. On day when was a holiday “Thanksgiving Day” him met two … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Aqueduct (Student’s draft)

The author Ray Bradbury in his short story “The Aqueduct” wrote about the sluices which was build by the North’s people and the South’s people. The South’s people didn’t have water and they waited it for a year. But in … Continue reading

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Situation on Vocabulary Notes 2 (Student’s draft)

Once upon a time one schoolgirl went to school. Her name is Helen. She had three classes in that day. One of them was Physical Education. She liked very much ran, because she was one of the best runner in … Continue reading

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Charecter Sketch 3 (Student’s draft)

Judy was a very grateful for the help from her guardian, because she always wrote to him the letters with all details her life, and her education.  Judy didn’t have the enemies. She liked the girls, the teachers, and the … Continue reading

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Letter Writing (Student’s draft)

My dear Helen My education in the University gets a nicer and nicer. I am a sophomore. In this semester I have more new subjects which help me develop my English in conversation. In the previous year I didn’t know … Continue reading

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