Category Archives: Student 16

Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

She is a great girl who stirs ??? admiration of all. I hope to remain my friend forever. Always ask direct questions [who? what do you mean?] Sometimes ??? fail to discover another person with an expression in the sky. It … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

The teacher is a person who educates and teachers others. A teacher educates a student may also be described as a personal tutor [???]. A good teacher has an inner calling for adequate communucation of information, but it should  and … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Unicorn in the Garden (Student’s draft)

??? ‘The unicorn in the garden’ by James Thurber is about a couple in which  the woman is indifferent to her husband, because he wanted to convince her that he saw a little freak. A man saw a unicorn in … Continue reading

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