Category Archives: Student 11

Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

I would like to describe a person that is very interesting for the first sight. This person isn’t tall. She’s like a child. She has blonde hair like a sunlight. Her eyes are green like ??? grass in spring. Her … Continue reading

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Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

A teacher should have a dress code when he/she comes in front of the students. When you are a school teacher, such luxuries [what kind of luxuries?] are completely out of question. Parents, children and administrators, all need to trust in … Continue reading

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Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

 In the short story [fable] “The Owl Who Was God”(1940), by James Thurber, the author maintains the idea that sometimes people are so blind that their foolishness can lead to death [nice TS]. In the forest lives an owl [W.O.]. that … Continue reading

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Summary 1: The Aqueduct (Student’s draft)

In the short story “The Aqueduct”(1979), Ray Bradbury suggests  that people who lived in the South tried to appease with the blooded water [I’m afraid, I don’t get your point here] that was running from the North through the aqueduct. … Continue reading

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Situation on Vocabulary Notes 2 (Student’s draft)

Baba Zina’s revenge It was a cold autumn afternoon of. Baba Zina was sitting in her armchair and she was watching TV. Suddenly she heard a knock at the door. She was surprised of this because she has never had … Continue reading

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Character Sketch 3 (Student’s draft)

“Experience is what you get when you didn’t get what you wanted. And experience is often the most valuable thing you have to offer.” Randy Pausch This quotation has a great impact on our text “A freshman’s experience”. It is … Continue reading

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Letter Writing (Student’s draft)

Dear Jackie, I decided to write to you this letter because I wanted to share especially with you my feelings. I hope, after reading my great letter, you’ll be kind and you’ll tell me about your feelings. I would like … Continue reading

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