Category Archives: Students’ homework

Text Analysis 1 (Student’s draft)

In the short story “Seeing people off” the author [who’s the author?] reveals how people try to change their life, because sometimes they have an incapacity of expressing their feelings in difficult moments of life [difficult to understand what you actually … Continue reading

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Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

She is a great girl who stirs ??? admiration of all. I hope to remain my friend forever. Always ask direct questions [who? what do you mean?] Sometimes ??? fail to discover another person with an expression in the sky. It … Continue reading

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Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

I am very lucky to have such a wonderful colleague and friend. I know her all my life. She is beautiful like a diamond in the sky. She has a golden soul. She always seems to be in a good … Continue reading

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Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

She is not a tall person. She doesn’t have a blonde hair. Her eyes are dark. She is a nice and pretty girl. Every morning she is sleeping, because on her face we usually notice that she worked hard yesterday … Continue reading

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Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

It was calm summer evening. The sun was setting over the horizon, leaving on the sea fiery trail. Gulls were lazily swayed in the waves, trying to drown the faint sounds of the tide. I was walking through the wild … Continue reading

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Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

People say that the face is the mirror of the human soul. I am convinced of this when I look at my friend. His face is always open and welcoming emits some goodwill. In appearance he was a simple guy. … Continue reading

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Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

She is beautiful and regined as my favorite flower – a ROSE. When I look in her green eyes, I see all the beauty of the world. Her smile is as the gentle as the touch of a sunbeam. Her hairs … Continue reading

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