Descriptive Paragraph (Student’s draft)

One day I saw him in a restaurant. He passed by me. Definitely, I was delighted with his astounding perfume. He slid near me. I saw him entirely. He was probably twenty – one years old. He was like a fascinating figure that astonished me. He was well dressed and I supposed that his costume was expensive.  He asked my name. I listened attentively to his voice. His voice [It] was quiet and sweet like a calm wind in the summer. After that I saw his eyes. They were black like a night’s darkness. He looked at me.  He touched my hand. I realized that his skin was very soft. Probably this meeting I’ll never forget [WO]

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