Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

My colleague is very pretty and friendly. She is tall, elegant and slender. She has black hair, brown eyes and she is always well dressed. My colleague likes fashion and she loves to tall her friends about it. She is a sociable person, and she always says what she thinks. She is honest and she has her own opinion. She is kind to  me, she is the only person who makes me feel well when I have some trubles. This nice person knows everything about me and I trust her. She is not indifferent to others and she is always ready to help somebody and to give advices. My colleague is an amazing person and I love her very much.

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1 Response to Guess Who? (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Dear Livia, I see that you’ve highlighted the TS. Good. Now, I have marked in red the second sentence as the words you used there don’t go together. You see your enumerations should be logically connected. You could have said, for example, “She is tall and slender, but above all elegant”. Then you made some spelling mistakes. And please revise the uncountable nouns in English.

    Not bad! Good luck 🙂

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