Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

Teachers are our second parents. They tought us what is truth, beauty, kindness and evil.  Not everybody can become a good teacher, that is why a teacher can be compared with an artist and teaching with an art. A good teacher differs by patience, love for children, education. A teacher is always ready to help. Teachers plant seeds of knowledge that grow forever.

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1 Response to Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Aurica, exclude the first two sentences, and write another TS, and you’ve got a nice paragraph. Good luck 🙂

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