Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

If you want to become  a good teacher you have to  wish  it truly.To be  a techer  is not  easy. It  needs a lot  of responsability, patience, love  for children. This  profession is not  very  well,paind and it needs a lot of expense an didactic materials . Only  a person who  dreams about this profession [really?] can  go in for teaching

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1 Response to Paragraph Writing 1 (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Dear Cristina, I had no idea that it is so easy to become a teacher, one should only dream about it! No hard work? I think you should have developed your ideas more. Good luck. 🙂

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