Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

The story [no title???] written by an unknown writer shows that no conflict can’t [double negation] destroy the love between brothers which is blessed by God. One day two brothers who live near each other fall into conflict. Soon a man with a carpenter’s tool box comes to the older brother’s door and he asks for a job. The older brother commands to this man to built a fence on the shore of the creek which separates him of  his brother’s house. The man understands the situation and he builts a bridge  stretching from one side of the creek to the other [so have I understioo correctly that he disobeyed???]  Thanks to this bridge the two brothers reconcile, forgot [what tense?] their quarrel and they live happily.

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1 Response to Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Dear Livia, it’s not bad. Just it was a bit confusing for me to understand why the hired man didn’t build the fence. Be more careful next time 🙂

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