Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

     Huang Yipeng in his short story “Home alone” supports the idea that children must be more carefully if they remained   alone.  In the story there were two brothers. One day they  remained at home. At the door knocks a strange man [word order]. They opened and the man forced them to entered in the kitchen. He locked them there.  He was a robber. The younger brother went  out throw the window and called the police. The robber was catch . The policemen thank to the gays. They had learnt a lesson of safely and responsibility.

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1 Response to Summary 2: Free Choice (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Aurica, you should be more attentive. There are some silly mistakes. Please be more careful next time 🙂

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