Situation on Vocabulary Notes 2 (Student’s draft)

Once in the winter, a boy named Anthony went to the hill sledding. On the street was very cold. There was a lot of snow. Anthony came home, took off his shoes, his feet were wet. When Anthony woke up, he felt a kind of slack and light-headed. The mother gave him a thermometer, he measured the temperature, it was 38.8 degrees. The mother called the doctor, the doctor came and examined him. After that, the doctor said that he had a flue. The doctor prescribed him medicine and mom went to the pharmacy and bought what the doctor has prescribed. Anthony quickly recovered and feel fresh.

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1 Response to Situation on Vocabulary Notes 2 (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Dear Cristina, I like this one more than your previous stories. There’s transition between ideas. However, you did not use all the words from the vocabulary. The story is too short. Yet, it’s better. It’s a 6.
    Good luck!

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