To Whom It May Concern :) (Student’s draft)

Dear Peter,
For the beginnig I want to say that I was very happy to receive a letter from you and I decided to write you a letter too.

I can say about myself that I have already passed my exams.It was a bit difficult but I succeed.Now I have just had my classes.I miss you very much because I haven’t heard from you for very long.I would like to meet you because I also haven’t seen you for a long time.You have never found free time for me or your friends.I would like to ask you if you have seen my photos on my webpage.Have I changed a little?

I am angry with you because you have never called me up.I will be very happy if you come to visit me.I will wait your answer with much pleasure.

Sincerely yours,
Alina

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3 Responses to To Whom It May Concern :) (Student’s draft)

  1. Bors Irina says:

    I like it. I think you deserve a good mark.Well done.

  2. Caisin Anna says:

    I like it too, the only remark is that it is better to use “I`d like” than “I want” . The second sounds very powerful and general. Great job! 🙂

  3. Alina says:

    Thank you very much!

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