A good teacher is like a candle, it consumes itself to light the way of others (Student’s draft)

A teacher is a person who gives us knowledge [I’d rather say: ‘who shares his knowledge with us]. It Iis the light in of our darkness brains [no subject] [maybe ‘ignorant minds’].

I believe a teacher must love their career in order for them to provide a warm environment to the students [you should have developed this idea].

I believe  a real teacher becomes a real one through after many years of training and experiences in the field [You could have said: ‘It takes a good teacher many years of hard work to become a real professional’]. They have a lot of responsibilityies and they need to make sure that they make learning a positive experience for all [good idea].

I agree that a teacher consumes itself to light our knowledge [mayby: ‘our way in the world of knowledge]. Firstly, because they make us personalities. Secondly, they show us how the world it is. They make us to hope [and maybe ‘aspire’] for a better life.

Teachers do the best through their love and knowledge. In my life I have  had met several teachers of different types. At the university I am lucky to have people who teach me about life [?]. Above all my teacher of English is one from millions candles [I’m pretty sure you wanted to pay me a compliment but you should reformulate this sentence]. I consider her a good teacher because she presents her teaching in a special way. This helps me to lern. But not every time I do it [????].

Moreover I can say that she consumes herself because it is seeing seen through her behavior. Always is smiling [no subject again!/ and what does the use of present continuous mean in this case, does it express your annoyance, be careful]. Sometimes she forgives our behavior. Also she is a symphatetic person.

In addition I would to say that a teacher must to be open to many different types of people, ideas and cultures. He must try to respect the views of everyone.

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3 Responses to A good teacher is like a candle, it consumes itself to light the way of others (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    I like it. However, if you begin an idea, develop it. Remember you should avoid one-sentence paragraphs. Also avoid word-for-word translation. And, Daniela, remember the strict word order of the English language: there’s always a SUBJECT in the sentence. Try to do always your homework and everything will be just super. 🙂

  2. daniela says:

    thank you very much. i will try to change my behavior …

  3. Maryam Usman Omotizi says:

    I’m really learning a lot here! Thanks to you all.

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