There are a lot of professions in the world. It is very hard to choose the best one.
My point of view is In my oppinion / To my mind the hardest professions are those in which there is a direct ly contact with people. It is much harder if this these people have a are young age. [and probably here you should have mentioned what is this profession so that it is clear why you begin the next paragraph speaking about teaching]
To be a good teacher is very difficult [I’d rather say: ‘It is very difficult to be a good teacher.’]. But what does it mean
s to be a good teacher? For sure, every pupil apart can tell a lot about this thing [?]. A person who is going to become a teacher has to make something like a plan for their personality. I mean that there are a lot of rules which must be obeyed when you touch somebody’s soul. [what you probably wanted to say is that an aspiring teacher should be very well organised and plan everything, I still don’t understand what you mean by ‘a plan for their personality’]
Every teacher consumes
itself themselves, because they can’t do something over wise [did you want to say otherwise?]. Every time when the teacher explains something, or listens to the answer of their pupils, they consume s a lot of energy. Every teacher is a simple human creature , but which who has a lot of work to do everyday, because they have to improve themselves. They have to do it because everyday the world changes and a true teacher should know how to show the necessary direction, how to light [or maybe enlighten] the children’s minds.
I think that it’s a great comparison teacher-candle [why?]. The candle is at the same time soft because of its wax, and full of light and energy –because of the fire which inspires and dominates it [ a great idea indeed but it somehow comes out of the blue and it needs to be developed].