My holiday! (Student’s draft)

Holyday passed unnoticed, was a fleeting moment, during the summer I stayed home with my family and with friends.

Sunday go to church to pray for my soul and my family. Every moment that passed was thought lost.

I miss the collegues and teachers. I look forward to see my colleagues again.

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2 Responses to My holiday! (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Dear Olesea, I do appreciate what you have done but you should know that the topic of the essay was a bit different. Secondly, there are some mistakes in your writing. You remember that I told you that you should work harder, especially this summer, to catch up with the gilrls. I know that you can do it. Everything is up to you. We’ll meet in September and I’ll see how you progressed. I would strongly recommend to rewrite this ‘essay’. And one more thing, this is the second essay., Where is the first.
    Good luck to you. And keep working, only in this way you will succeed 🙂

  2. Bors Irina says:

    Olesea I think that you did a good job, but … you have mistakes. And, your essay is too short. Work harder , I believe in you!

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