My English summer adventures (Student’s draft)

During this summer I was thinking about the title of this essay. I think that it is an interesting one and I decided to structure my essay in to parts.

o, when I ended my summer exams, I brought the book “The picture of Dorian Grey”, I opened it ,and in that moment I entered e new world for me, which I named-original English language. When I began to read it, I was really scared that would not understand anything. When I ended to read it, I came to the conclusion that everything is possible to do. I worked with the vocabulary, and it was a surprise for me that it was a pleasure to open so many times the dictionary.

I sad that I entered a new world, so, that`s why I decided to download from Internet audio book in English. This spring I read “Wuthering Hights” and I liked it book. It was the first one which I downloaded. In this way I try to improve my English level.

The second part of my essay is about my adventures which began yesterday, when I arrived to Bulgaria. English is everywhere here. I live in a hotel now, and I talk in English with the personal. I can practices all that I learned at first year of studies. Yesterday I visited the market, I really needed English there, to explain what I wanted.

These are my adventures of this summer. I am a part of them right now and I am ready for another adventures in another yeas of studies.

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1 Response to My English summer adventures (Student’s draft)

  1. vickycondrat says:

    Ann, I’m extremely happy that you think the essay topic is very interesting and I’m deligted that your English adventures are useful to you. However, I would like you to revise this piece and correct the mistakes which I’m sure you have made by mistake. I would also like you to think if it is necessary to write ‘in the first / second part of the essay’. Maybe you may think of other words that will allow you to have a smooth transition from one idea to another. Good luck to you and enjoy your last summer days 🙂

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